11 - Take It In Stride

September 30th, 2010, 11:28 pm

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Reply Fauna, September 30th, 2010, 11:28 pm

The purpose of this chapter was to give a second perspective on one of the main characters, whom formerly wasn't coming off very well on anyone. My idea of the perfect story is one where each main character is three-dimensional and understandible...plus, I wanted to throw my readers a curve on which of the aliens they want to win.

Man, I just realized how much I'm going to have to tone down this series when I pitch it to a studio. All these ailusions to smoking, drinking, general violence...and I detest my own lettering. When did I get so sloppy and illegible?

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Reply AKHTS, October 3rd, 2010, 4:45 pm

AKHTS Well first off, you did win with it, woman, definitly no manicheism in your works in any way. This is just great.

Also, "must shoot with net"'s the best drunk line I've ever read. XD

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